The Final Residence of Mr. Hertzen: 1, 2, 3 and 4

Started this in my Fiction Class and am determined to finish. Part one finished, next part on the way (i swear). would love to hear comments on this one, cause its definately still a work in progress. (also, the title is just a working title). This is dedicated to my Grandfather and Grandmother, Mr. and Mrs. Osheroff, to whom I owe everything.

The Final Residence of Mr. Hertzen:
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4